: - Author has a clear understanding and passion for BNWO and achieving it's stated objectives.
- Author is well read, very few grammatical or spelling errors.
- The structure of the story is well recounted, focused on the points that are important in introducing the main characters to the reader and developing the plot, with minimal extraneous/non-relevant information.
- I really enjoy stories where there is an intergeneratonal bond forged over the advancement of Black Superiority/BNWO between father and son, either white or black lineage but in this case it's mixed, that brings them closer together, and this story is a perfect example of it!
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- Too short! Just as it was getting really good, it had to end, like all good things. 
I hope the author will continue to develop this storyline as it has great potential to inspire those who read it.
Wow, I really enjoyed this story a lot and look forward to reading further chapters (hopefully) about Cleave and his newly found passion for relieving cocky whitebois of their heavy "burden" and putting them in their proper place before all Black Men as a castrated white eunuch!
