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Pros: Great story please do a part 2
Great story please do a part 2
Curt Bruch
Curt Bruch
Miss Wendy has already been in touch and provided me with more 'material' so I'm already working on a follow-on. Thanks for your interest and encouragement.
Curt
Pros: This is a very well written story. I felt like we were able to get inside Austin's head. Love how the story's villains were white women, and not the black men.
Cons: The story is long, and takes some time to read. But I certainly would not recommend skipping any sections.
This is a wonderful story about public humiliation of a white boy. Almost like an inferiors nightmare about his insecurity regarding the development of his body. Or maybe more accurately, what doesn't develop so much for a white boy. The black males are not demonized, which I find refreshing. I would like to see how Austin and Terry's relationship develops during the school year.
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Pros: Nice descriptions and energy, the characters were very believable.
Cons: It's a little short.
The Author's use of descriptions is very erotic, and I would have enjoyed more. Especially more character development. I DO hope the author provides a continuation? I would love to read Chapter 2!
agilecat
agilecat
Yes, I agree it was my first effort and is just a short story. There will be more and I will take on board your points about character development. Thanks for the review :)
Pros: like a fairytale…. every sissy beta cuck’s dream cum true!
Cons: only that I didn’t experience this, firsthand.
my sweet adorable Samantha has cooked up a hot dish here, friends. ready, set…. STROKE. 😈
Pros: Good Start
Cons: A Little Short
Acknowledging that you're a BBC slut is a Great start. ♠️
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Pros: Excellent story, very well written. Nice to see a good new author at work.
I didn't have to edit a comma or a period, didn't have to change a word. Welcome to the site! Very good story!
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writer4hire69
writer4hire69
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Looking forward to hopefully contributing more.
Pros: Her and Paul have been together for 2 years plus now of course there is a Emotional attachment
Cons: Not sure what to think about this one 🤔
Hopefully Suzanna is using her manipulation skills to lure Stefan into a sense of contentment about his Fantasy and her love for him.
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A lot of work went into this, it's not often you get actual world-building in your sex stories. I'd like to see more stories like this!
Eternal Robin
Eternal Robin
Vey high praise! Thank you kindly for the review, Dig 🙇‍♀️. Eve has been living in my head for a while and I'm grateful to Darkwanderer for giving her a place to spread her wings! Book two is in the works and will be hot on the heels of chapter 14 so look forward to more bombastic adventures with Eve and Carmine!
Excellent story thus far. I really appreciate how descriptive you are during the whole story. I really hope you continue this story with many chapters and continue to be as descriptive throughout.

I really relate to Kent, I was the same ways so many years ago. In denial, didn’t want to admit it, but slowly became more and more addicted and a solid believer
Pros: Well-written and very sexy.
Cons: Nothing so far.
Very sexy story of a ****** that's about to be Blacked.
This is going to be a slowburn BNWO conversion and I’m strapped in for the ride
Oh yeah I'm definitely strapped in for the rest of this. Love a white boi whose gonna be shown his proper place
Pros: An excellent, well written story with interesting characters and development. Time spent to develop the story is nice making it feel more real. The sex is well done and interesting which is a real pleasure to read.
Cons: Many threads /characters to follow which can be hard sometimes both for the reader (and writer) to keep control of. I would suggest avoiding adding too many new characters but work on those already introduced or mentioned.
All in all an excellent contribution to the genre and promises much to come from this writer. I look forward to seeing it develop.
E
EbonLand
Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful suggestions.
Pros: White extinction
Cons: I won’t be around to witness it
So well written and so true - gives us hope for the future
Pros: Gay little white losers getting cucked and snuffed in a trash compactor <3
Cons: None
I am a longtime fan. Please, come back, I want to support you :3
Pros: Strong background story that is well written. Makes me feel like I get to know the lead character. The story also humanizes the refugees.
Cons: No cons.
Extremely well written. Very easy to read even though the story is long. The lead character is likable and interesting. The sex scenes are engaging and hot. I also like the ending.
Suzi
Suzi
Thank you, Sir! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Pros: Well-written. The prose is good and flows well. Descriptions are very sexy and exciting. Build up is flawless.
Cons: Sex is very quick. It looks like Darius cums in three minjutes.
Yes, the husband should know and eventually accept his place under the real Real Man, the real Master of the house/******. He does not have to be now "right now". However, he also deserves his journey into acceptance.
There are no bad parts in this story. However, the part that is "less good" is the actual sex. The story buulds so much momento on the script, that I felt very underwhelmed. The sex does not need 20 pages. However, it's frustrating when the author spends so much attention building up to the fuck... just finish the entire fuck itseld in two meager paragraphs or little nore.

This story does not need 15 chapters or more. It only needs a couple more. Keep it simple-keep it sweed.
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Pros: Love how normal it has become to have Paul as the alpha. The last scene where steph takes care of the leaves while Paul takes care of Susannah is priceless. Rock hard reading that one! Love Suzannah telling steph “cum already!” later as he gets himself off into the condom!
Cons: stef is in Suzannah way too much … his strokes need to be limited (unless he wants to stroke Paul?). Maybe stef strokes in Suzannah should be limited to how many he gives Paul? Oh, and a double condom seems like a good idea.
Excellent chapter Curt! Can’t wait for more
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