I have to say, I think you are my favorite author on this site and others. I absolutely adore how you capture the wife's changes. How she reacts to realizing what she's been missing and how all other things, those things that once seemed so precious and important, are now a distant second to her more primal needs.
I am always attracted to the stories where a white wife/mother essentially turns against or uses her ****** and/or husband for her and her lovers' pleasure. In addition, you capture the other aspects of her evolving to a different person with things such as smoking and drinking so well.
I love your work and look forward to reading and enjoying more of your stories.
I am always attracted to the stories where a white wife/mother essentially turns against or uses her ****** and/or husband for her and her lovers' pleasure. In addition, you capture the other aspects of her evolving to a different person with things such as smoking and drinking so well.
I love your work and look forward to reading and enjoying more of your stories.
I try to make sure characters are believable both through their motivations and their dialogue. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story 
I hope I can continue to write enjoyable works for you in the future as well!!