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Pros: Good start
This is a very good start, I’d like to see some of his friends, join the ****** and take over the household even more, I think he’s too lenient, and needs to be stricter
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cuckboie
cuckboie
Excellent feedback and great ideas! Thank you.
Pros: It's all in the detail, enjoyed it.
Cons: the build-up before going out was good but I think just a tinge too long.
A good read overall, not sure why the young man took her on a first date to the 'Wrong' side of town, but...I eagerly await the next chapter, hope it's soon?
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Pros: Well-written. The prose is good and flows well. Descriptions are very sexy and exciting. Build up is flawless.
Cons: Sex is very quick. It looks like Darius cums in three minjutes.
Yes, the husband should know and eventually accept his place under the real Real Man, the real Master of the house/******. He does not have to be now "right now". However, he also deserves his journey into acceptance.
There are no bad parts in this story. However, the part that is "less good" is the actual sex. The story buulds so much momento on the script, that I felt very underwhelmed. The sex does not need 20 pages. However, it's frustrating when the author spends so much attention building up to the fuck... just finish the entire fuck itseld in two meager paragraphs or little nore.

This story does not need 15 chapters or more. It only needs a couple more. Keep it simple-keep it sweed.
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Pros: I love the way you write, you have talent, keep going like this!
Maybe she should tell him, maybe he'll be a bit against it at first but in the end he must accept the fact that they are meant for each other (sexually speaking). Just an idea of course, I'm sure you'll do great ☺️ (sorry for my weird English I'm still learning as self-taught)
Pros: very erotic.
I love the description of the study, it's methods and it's very revealing results! I doubt the participants in the study could ever reverse the results.
Can't wait to see whats in store for Alec next!
Well done
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Pros: Very good breakdown
Cons: could be expanded
describing the different terms and goals helps
Pros: The depth of detail and emotion
I have to say, I think you are my favorite author on this site and others. I absolutely adore how you capture the wife's changes. How she reacts to realizing what she's been missing and how all other things, those things that once seemed so precious and important, are now a distant second to her more primal needs.

I am always attracted to the stories where a white wife/mother essentially turns against or uses her ****** and/or husband for her and her lovers' pleasure. In addition, you capture the other aspects of her evolving to a different person with things such as smoking and drinking so well.

I love your work and look forward to reading and enjoying more of your stories.
Eternal Robin
Eternal Robin
Ahhhhhhh thank you! That really means a lot 🙏🏼 I try to make sure characters are believable both through their motivations and their dialogue. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story 🙇‍♀️ I hope I can continue to write enjoyable works for you in the future as well!!
Pros: White extinction
Cons: I won’t be around to witness it
So well written and so true - gives us hope for the future
Pros: Very sexy story. It is well-written and filled with great moments. Short and sweet.
Cons: Maybe the journey of the hisband could be a little longer, specially after he was "demoted".
Grerat story. In fact, more stories should be like this one: short and swet. In fact, more white women go through this that one can imagine.
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Pros: Good concept
Story moved at a good pace
Solid writing
Cons: No interracial element
Story could have progressed further
No apparent hesitation / jealousy from husbands pov
A solid read. Just wish it would have progressed further and also had an interracial element.
Awesome story. Can’t wait for more
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Reactions: Akumajou
Pros: Well-written and very sexy.
Cons: Nothing so far.
Very sexy story of a ****** that's about to be Blacked.
Pros: Finally, this chapter demonstrates the resolution of Susanna and Stefan, and a very satisfying way forward for them.
This might be the most important and eventful book of this entire saga.
Pros: One of the best cuckold stories I've read. Love the evolution through the lifestyle. Perfectly said.
Cons: More sex details and ****** integration/take over with Steve. Why the divorce part? Stay married, but take his money and dominate this ******.
One of the best cuckold stories I've read. Love the evolution through the lifestyle. Perfectly well rounded, uniquely presented and well written.
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Reactions: proud
Pros: Relatable scenario - Loved how you set the scene!
Was able to relate, as my wife and I were separated when she had her first black man
Cons: None I can think of
These stories of "how we got here" are always exciting to me!
I can especially relate to the paragraph after she told him it had happened and all day at the convention he couldn't stop thinking about it - ending up in the bathroom jacking off, while he pictured what they did.
I think that is a thing everyone who has been there can relate to. When I found out DeeAnna had been fucking a black guy she met, while we were separated; I must have jacked off a dozen times that weekend, thinking about what they were doing! Great story when you stir your readers imagination to the point of being extremely stimulated!
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Pros: like a fairytale…. every sissy beta cuck’s dream cum true!
Cons: only that I didn’t experience this, firsthand.
my sweet adorable Samantha has cooked up a hot dish here, friends. ready, set…. STROKE. 😈
Pros: stef has an opportunity to show Paul and Suzannah how excited that is to hear them say I love you to each other. stef has a role in this threesome to enhance their satisfaction with his hands mouth and body.
Cons: None; this threesome is developing beautifully.
So exciting, will stef give Suzannah to Paul by holding Paul’s cock as he enters Suzannah? Cannot wait for more!!
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Reactions: Rlblank
Pros: Suzanna’s patience runs low. Yay!
After the “married couple” week she had with Paul, she wants more of the emotional connection, and she is warning Stefan that this woukd change their marriage. Brilliant writing.
Pros: Nice descriptions and energy, the characters were very believable.
Cons: It's a little short.
The Author's use of descriptions is very erotic, and I would have enjoyed more. Especially more character development. I DO hope the author provides a continuation? I would love to read Chapter 2!
agilecat
agilecat
Yes, I agree it was my first effort and is just a short story. There will be more and I will take on board your points about character development. Thanks for the review :)
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